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Yesterday

It's too late
To go back and pick them up.
Pieces of me
Are all over the place,
Following their shadows,
Running away,
Eluding my grasp.
Slippery me.
There's no way to go
But back to where it
All began.
There's always yesterday.
Looking into your
Forever eyes
Makes me forget
That I have troubles.
That I loved you once
I do not regret.




3-17-1994
 

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Tomorrow for RonBee!


It`s not too late
To go back and pick them up
Pieces of you were
All over the place
Following their shaddows
Running away
Elluding your grasp.
Slippery you.
There`s always a way to go
Starting from where it all began.
There will always be tomorrow.
Looking into my eyes
Makes you forget
That you have troubles.
That you still love me
You won`t regret.

I hope this helps you be more confident and happy about tomorrow. Tomorrow`s another day!:)
 

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Interesting changes there! It has changed from a memory to a promise. (This is one of my favorite poems.)
:)
 

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Interesting changes there! It has changed from a memory to a promise. (This is one of my favorite poems.)
:)

Hi RonBee

I have made the changes only to cheer you up and I hope, with your permission, I haven`t made a blunder.
 

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I loved it! Especially, "Slippery me".

:);-)
 

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Hi RonBee

I have made the changes only to cheer you up and I hope, with your permission, I haven`t made a blunder.
It is a public forum. You can say what you like. (The poem was written in 1994.)
:)
 
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