[Essay] Your firm is where I can thrive?

[gookenhaim]

I want to say "Your company is a place where I can thrive because it provides cooperative as well as competitive environment."
But I want to make it sound professional
How can I re-write? thank you!

 

[teechar]

Hello gookenhaim, and welcome to the forum.

I want to say "Your company is a place where I can thrive because it provides [STRIKE]cooperative as well as competitive[/STRIKE] an environment that is competitive but cooperative."
But I want to make it sound professional.
How can I rewrite it? Thank you!

See above.

 

[gookenhaim]

thank you for your answer teechar!

It's really good
but my english sentences are quite monotonous because I repeat the same pattern of grammar in writing haha
is there a better way to deliver the same meaning in a different sentence structure? thank you!

 

[teechar]

Thank you for your answer, teechar!
It's really good.

You're welcome.

But my English sentences are quite monotonous because I repeat the same pattern of grammar in writing. [STRIKE]haha[/STRIKE]
Is there a better way to deliver the same meaning in a different sentence structure? Thank you!

It depends on what you want to say. The original sentence is what I classify as waffle. If you show us other sentences, we'll do our best to help.