correct this sentence - :Joined as a teller and promoted to Internal Auditor within a year.
M mathewvarghese_007 Member Joined Dec 10, 2012 Member Type Student or Learner Native Language Hindi Home Country India Current Location United Arab Emirates Apr 30, 2013 #1 correct this sentence - :Joined as a teller and promoted to Internal Auditor within a year.
B bodogeri Member Joined Apr 13, 2013 Member Type Interested in Language Native Language Hungarian Home Country Hungary Current Location Hungary Apr 30, 2013 #2 I would use passive: He joined as a teller and was promoted to Internal Auditor within a year.
5jj Moderator Staff member Joined Oct 14, 2010 Member Type English Teacher Native Language British English Home Country Czech Republic Current Location Czech Republic Apr 30, 2013 #3 I would say, "Please correct this sentence".
B billmcd Key Member Joined Mar 27, 2009 Member Type English Teacher Native Language English Home Country United States Current Location United States May 1, 2013 #4 It's not a "sentence"--no subject.
I ian_k Member Joined Mar 21, 2010 Member Type English Teacher Native Language Indonesian Home Country Indonesia Current Location Indonesia May 1, 2013 #5 [h=2][/h] I would say, "Please correct this sentence". Ouch !!!