reduced relative clauses

aysaa said:

Hi,

Kids, I will tell you a story which has not been told by your elders.

Could you please tell me how to reduce this relative clause? I am giving two examples to you to check.

-Kids, I will tell you a story untold by your elders.

-Kids, I will tell you a story not told by your elders.

Are they OK?

Thanks.

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aysaa said:

Hi,

-Kids, I will tell you a story untold by your elders.

-Kids, I will tell you a story not told by your elders.

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Odessa Dawn said:

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***NOT A TEACHER***

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"Elders" isn’t correct unless you mean senior members of certain churches or tribes.

More: go here please, post # 5.
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