skynet0512
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In fact, I just need to have some sentences checked. Hence, if possible, find mistakes in those below sentences:
Topic : environment protection
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It is my conviction that citizens should share the burden of environment with their administration instead of merely shifting the responsibility for them. It appears that citizens are in most parts accountable for environmental issues because an annual large amount of garbage , according to scientific surveys, derives from households, not only from big factories. Hence, some simple manners such as putting the rubbish into bins or classifying them into categories in the light of their chemical features, which are biodegradable and non-biodegradable elements, will lessen the pressure on cleaners who have to collect massive amount of waste everyday. By this way, each individual is totally able to contribute to reduce environmental devastation
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Is that OK ? :-|
Topic : environment protection
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It is my conviction that citizens should share the burden of environment with their administration instead of merely shifting the responsibility for them. It appears that citizens are in most parts accountable for environmental issues because an annual large amount of garbage , according to scientific surveys, derives from households, not only from big factories. Hence, some simple manners such as putting the rubbish into bins or classifying them into categories in the light of their chemical features, which are biodegradable and non-biodegradable elements, will lessen the pressure on cleaners who have to collect massive amount of waste everyday. By this way, each individual is totally able to contribute to reduce environmental devastation
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Is that OK ? :-|
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