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''The mass media, including TV, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people's ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree this statement? Give reasons for your answer. ''
Here is my essay.
The main function of mass media is the giving appropriate and true news to people from all over the world. Moreover, it plays a huge role in human culture activities. However, many magazines write and publish distorted information in order to sell their newspapers and increase their reputation.
From human childhood TV, radio and books play a significance role in developing our minds and expressing our imagination. I believe that popularization of mass media has more advantages than disadvantages. Firstly, the one of great importance is helping men to develop their own minds and creations. Furthermore, book and radio help to learn something new about world, other culture and traditions and foreign languages .I think TV is a great opportunity in shaping your mind, because there are things that you don’t know and it will help you in improving your thoughts. Secondly, the popular TV shows and programs encourage people to be active in social life and actively advance opinions. Unfortunately, there are also the big problems occurring with wide population of films, where actors use jargon and obscene words. In addition, the advertising of violence, smoking, drinking, drug abuse and sex are impropriate. These scenes are awfully harmful for young generation developing characters. I suggest use the mass media opportunities just in positive things and don’t let children to watch such films and serials.
Overall, I believe that Global increasing of mass media is very necessary in our hard world to keep in touch with other countries and inform people about everyday events. Besides, nowadays it is a unique link in developing our minds thereby helping grow in our social position.
:-(Is it good enough?
Please , check and rate my essay. Currently, i am preparing for IELTS exam and i need help.
Thanks again.
M.
''The mass media, including TV, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people's ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree this statement? Give reasons for your answer. ''
Here is my essay.
The main function of mass media is the giving appropriate and true news to people from all over the world. Moreover, it plays a huge role in human culture activities. However, many magazines write and publish distorted information in order to sell their newspapers and increase their reputation.
From human childhood TV, radio and books play a significance role in developing our minds and expressing our imagination. I believe that popularization of mass media has more advantages than disadvantages. Firstly, the one of great importance is helping men to develop their own minds and creations. Furthermore, book and radio help to learn something new about world, other culture and traditions and foreign languages .I think TV is a great opportunity in shaping your mind, because there are things that you don’t know and it will help you in improving your thoughts. Secondly, the popular TV shows and programs encourage people to be active in social life and actively advance opinions. Unfortunately, there are also the big problems occurring with wide population of films, where actors use jargon and obscene words. In addition, the advertising of violence, smoking, drinking, drug abuse and sex are impropriate. These scenes are awfully harmful for young generation developing characters. I suggest use the mass media opportunities just in positive things and don’t let children to watch such films and serials.
Overall, I believe that Global increasing of mass media is very necessary in our hard world to keep in touch with other countries and inform people about everyday events. Besides, nowadays it is a unique link in developing our minds thereby helping grow in our social position.
:-(Is it good enough?