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    Kindly check my grammar

    Hello sir/maam

    Kindly check my grammar. This sentence will be place under my policy (guidelines in conducting satisfaction survey):


    1. Client preferences and needs changes rapidly over a period of time. Hence, client satisfaction survey shall be conducted every year.

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    Re: Kindly check my grammar

    Client preferences and needs change rapidly, so the client satisfaction survey will be conducted every year.

    That is how I would word it.

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    Re: Kindly check my grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by Munch View Post
    Client preferences and needs change rapidly, so the client satisfaction survey will be conducted every year.

    That is how I would word it.

    Tnx sir. Anymore ideas sir/maam?

    I'm avoiding to use a word "so that" & "so".

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    Re: Kindly check my grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by ranthrave View Post
    Tnx sir. Anymore ideas sir/maam?

    I'm avoiding to use a word "so that" & "so".
    Why do you want to avoid "so"?

    Anyway:

    Because/As client preferences and needs change rapidly, the client satisfaction survey will be conducted every year.

    I have a feeling you will not be happy with "because" or "as" at the start of a sentence though. Sorry! Tell us more about your situation so we can help you.

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    Re: Kindly check my grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by Munch View Post
    Why do you want to avoid "so"?

    Anyway:

    Because/As client preferences and needs change rapidly, the client satisfaction survey will be conducted every year.

    I have a feeling you will not be happy with "because" or "as" at the start of a sentence though. Sorry! Tell us more about your situation so we can help you.
    My situation..
    Sir I'm doing a policy (guidelines)

    I might consider number two (2)

    1.As client preferences and needs change rapidly, the client satisfaction survey will be conducted every year.

    2.Client preferences and needs change rapidly, the client satisfaction survey will be conducted every year.

    Thanks sir

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    Re: Kindly check my grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by ranthrave View Post
    My situation..
    Sir I'm doing a policy (guidelines)

    I might consider number two (2)

    1.As client preferences and needs change rapidly, the client satisfaction survey will be conducted every year.

    2.Client preferences and needs change rapidly, the client satisfaction survey will be conducted every year.

    Thanks sir
    Why? To me, number 2 is grammaticality incorrect.

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    Re: Kindly check my grammar

    Yah.. So I will consider number 1

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