trapanipalermo
Junior Member
- Joined
- Mar 22, 2008
- Member Type
- Academic
- Native Language
- Italian
- Home Country
- Italy
- Current Location
- Italy
Hi,
I'm almost finished with writing a book, and I would like to add a dedication to my family.
Can you correct the followin sentence, please?
Which one is the best expression?
1)To Daniela, Loretta and Maurizio: the ones that motivate my life (THE ONES is correct?)
2)To Daniela, Loretta and Maurizio: the persons that motivate me
3)To Daniela, Loretta and Maurizio: the people that motivate me
4)To Daniela, Loretta and Maurizio: the persons that make my world go round
5) To Daniela, Loretta and Maurizio: the persons that inspire my every single day
any other correction will be appreciated!
Thanks!!!
Vito
I'm almost finished with writing a book, and I would like to add a dedication to my family.
Can you correct the followin sentence, please?
Which one is the best expression?
1)To Daniela, Loretta and Maurizio: the ones that motivate my life (THE ONES is correct?)
2)To Daniela, Loretta and Maurizio: the persons that motivate me
3)To Daniela, Loretta and Maurizio: the people that motivate me
4)To Daniela, Loretta and Maurizio: the persons that make my world go round
5) To Daniela, Loretta and Maurizio: the persons that inspire my every single day
any other correction will be appreciated!
Thanks!!!
Vito