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[MYE_SUYAT]

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Dear _______________,

After much thought and consideration, I would like to formally tender my resignation from (company name) as Administrative Assistant. My last working day will be October 12, 2012.

I appreciate the opportunities I have been given here and I wish the company much success in the future.

 

[billmcd]

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Dear _______________,

After much thought and consideration, [STRIKE]I would like [/STRIKE] This is to formally tender my resignation from (company name) as Administrative Assistant. My last working day will be October 12, 2012.

I appreciate the opportunities I have been given here and I wish the company much success in the future.

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