Chicken Sandwich
Senior Member
- Joined
- Jun 20, 2010
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- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Russian Federation
- Current Location
- Netherlands
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There definitely is a long way until a true reunification of Germany on all levels. Films like ‘Goodbye Lenin’ might help improving and facilitating mutual understanding.
This is a student review of the film Goodbye Lenin which I found in a CPE sample paper here. According to the examiner, this review contains a few minor errors
The first sentence seems incomplete to me. I think we need to add a verb and I would change the position of “definitely”:
There is definitely a long way until a true reunification of Germany takes place on all levels.
Thank you in advance.
There definitely is a long way until a true reunification of Germany on all levels. Films like ‘Goodbye Lenin’ might help improving and facilitating mutual understanding.
This is a student review of the film Goodbye Lenin which I found in a CPE sample paper here. According to the examiner, this review contains a few minor errors
The first sentence seems incomplete to me. I think we need to add a verb and I would change the position of “definitely”:
There is definitely a long way until a true reunification of Germany takes place on all levels.
- Is the position of “definitely” more appropriate in my rewritten sentence?
- Is the addition of “takes place” appropriate here?
Thank you in advance.