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    Ashiuhto is offline Senior Member
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    has obviously changed

    Would anyone be kind enough to check the following paragraph for me? Thanks!

    As time goes by, the food culture has obviously changed. Fast food has replaced eating three meals at home, and McDonald has become indispensable in our life. No matter kids, teenagers or workers, all love the dining in McDonald. At fast food kingdom, the competition is fierce among the fast-food restaurants. Why McDonald be the top in many fast food restaurant, and get The king of fast food title? Then I will investigate the factors in McDonald’s success.
    Last edited by Ashiuhto; 06-Nov-2012 at 08:47. Reason: errors

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