mocciarina
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- Joined
- Mar 14, 2013
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- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Italian
- Home Country
- Italy
- Current Location
- Italy
I should correctly paraphrase this introduction paragraph, I'm grateful for anyone willing to help me correcting my sentence.
Original sentence: The charts below show the numbers of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market
my sentence: The graphs compare average figures for Japanese tourists that visited a foreign country to the Australian quota of Japanese tourism from 1985 to 1995.
Thanks in advance, any suggestion is welcomed!
Original sentence: The charts below show the numbers of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market
my sentence: The graphs compare average figures for Japanese tourists that visited a foreign country to the Australian quota of Japanese tourism from 1985 to 1995.
Thanks in advance, any suggestion is welcomed!