englishhobby
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A girl is writing a diary during the war. Is the following correct:
"Yesterday it was very frightening. I felt I could die of all those terrible sounds and flashes behind the window. <...> Father still wasn’t coming. He has come only just today."
Could you please correct this extract in case it is wrong or unnatural?
"Yesterday it was very frightening. I felt I could die of all those terrible sounds and flashes behind the window. <...> Father still wasn’t coming. He has come only just today."
Could you please correct this extract in case it is wrong or unnatural?
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