Which version is better - pleas see inside the thread

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Hello users!

1. The preparatory work aimed at dismounting the fan was performed.
2. The preparatory work was done, with the goal/object(ive)/aim/intention of dismounting the fan.Which is better?

I think they mean exactly the same
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Thank you.
 
Hello users!

1. The preparatory work aimed at dismounting the fan was performed.
2. The preparatory work was done, with the goal/object(ive)/aim/intention of dismounting the fan.Which is better?

I think they mean exactly the same
.

Thank you.

Both sentences have the same meaning, but I don't like either of them. How about something simpler? "The preparatory work for dismounting the fan was performed."
 
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A better title would have been
The preparatory work.



'Thread titles should include all or part of the word/phrase being discussed.'
 
Yes, You are right, Rover_KE, but I was afraid there would be too little space for the title in the header.
 
Yes, You are right, Rover_KE, but I was afraid there would be too little space for the title in the header.

You don't need to put the while sentence in a title. Just calling it "The preparatory work" would have been fine. It's just so that we can easily differentiate between threads.
 
I will try to do it in future.
 
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