Internship Cover Letter (326 words) - Awkwardly Sentences?

[Holz]

Hello all,

I'm applying for an internship in London and the deadline is quickly approaching and by quickly I mean tomorrow (CET time zone).
Yeah, I know...

I also can't find a proficient mother language spell checker. Could somebody here please give me general input?
There are a few awkward sentences, which I'm not able to replace in a fine way and I'm unsure regarding some comma placements.
I would send the 309 words cv immediately via mail out of anonymity reasons, if someone offers me his or her help.

I'm sorry if I've choosen the wrong forum to post this questions.

Kind regards,

 

[emsr2d2]

As you probably realised when there were no responses, we don't work this way. You can't email things to us. This forum is designed for public use so anything you want checked has to be posted on the open forums.

If you want a private proofreader or editor, you will have to pay for one.

I note that your letter was due on 17th November. I hope you're successful in your application for an internship.