[Grammar] Could someone help me to correct this text?

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Kuba89

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Hi everyone,
It's a fake text, and to most important thing for me in that is grammar, which I would like to correct. Can you help me?

"My name is Jake, I am a Pole, I come from Poland. I live in the south of the country in the province of Silesia in Katowice.
2 years ago I graduated from the Technical University. My direction was an IT.
In every summer I worked in a company that dealt with the cleaning of turbin oil systems in many power plants in Poland. As a fitter.
After graduation I went hitchhiking to explore a bit of the world. I moonlighted in various countries by performing a simple physical work. Gathering grapes in France, or like a warehouse worker in the Netherlands. From those countries which I visited Thailand, Armenia, Georgia and Turkey were the best.
I love Thai food. The most hospitable people are the people of Armenia and Turkey."
 
Hi everyone,
[STRIKE]It's[/STRIKE] This is a fake text, [STRIKE]and to[/STRIKE] but the most important thing for me in [STRIKE]that[/STRIKE] it is grammar, which I would like to correct. Can you help me?

"My name is Jake, [STRIKE]I am a Pole,[/STRIKE] and I come from Poland. I live in the south of the country, in [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] Katowice which is in the province of Silesia. [STRIKE]in Katowice.[/STRIKE]
Two years ago, I graduated from the Technical University. My [STRIKE]direction[/STRIKE] major was [STRIKE]an[/STRIKE] in IT.

[STRIKE]In every[/STRIKE] For the past few summers, I worked as a fitter in a company that deals with the cleaning of turbine oil systems in many power plants in Poland. [STRIKE]As a fitter.[/STRIKE]

After I graduated, [STRIKE]graduation[/STRIKE] I went hitchhiking to explore a bit of the world. I [STRIKE]moonlighted[/STRIKE] worked in various countries by performing simple physical jobs such as [STRIKE]work. Gathering[/STRIKE] picking grapes in France, or [STRIKE]like[/STRIKE] as a warehouse worker in the Netherlands. [STRIKE]From[/STRIKE] Out of those countries which I visited, Thailand, Armenia, Georgia and Turkey were the best.
I love Thai food. The most hospitable people [STRIKE]are[/STRIKE] were the people of Armenia and Turkey.
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It's not a fake text. It's a genuine text with a lot of errors.
 
Thank you, teechar :)
 
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