[Grammar] Dear friends, can anybody help me correct this sentence?

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reza_elc87

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For most patients, application of PEMF in the second stage of menstrual cycle leads to relieve symptoms without need for any additional therapy.
 

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For most patients, the application of PEMF in the second stage of menstrual cycle [STRIKE]leads[/STRIKE] helps to relieve symptoms without the need for any additional therapy.
 

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In addition to tedmc's suggestions above, I would say "their/the menstrual cycle."
 

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I would say "tends" (to relieve symptoms) instead of "helps" (to relieve symptoms).
 
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