a look painted his face

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alpacinou

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Hello.

Can I say a specific look "paints" someone's face?

Is this sentence I have written a good one?

A look of pleasure painted her face after she saw the candy in her brother's hand.
 

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You might see "There was/She had a smile painted on her face" but it has a specific use - it suggests that it's a somewhat fake smile.
 

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I see.

Can this sentence be fixed if I change "paint"?
 

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Paint implies that something is applied on and is not natural or spontaneous.

How about she beamed with pleasure?
 
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