rodgers white
Senior Member
- Joined
- Jan 17, 2016
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- China
Hi everyone, are there any mistakes or repetitions in this piece of writing? I'm grateful for any contribution.
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Rui may have decided not to dwell on the mysteriousness of some failures, but they were like an earworm that refused to leave him in peace. He was able to move on to other things, but their song kept playing in the back of his mind, occasionally popping back up to where he could not ignore them until he forcibly occupied his mind with more pertinent things. Rui improved his bot factory slowly at first the speed picking up exponentially as he improved his tools, techniques, and understanding of biology. Biology, it seemed, was the key, his first presumption that the mechanical and electrical were separate from the biological, appeared to be wrong, he needed to combine all of these things to accomplish his goals. Yang was a great help, he was someone with whom Rui could discuss ideas, and this helped him gain some clarity of thought.
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Rui may have decided not to dwell on the mysteriousness of some failures, but they were like an earworm that refused to leave him in peace. He was able to move on to other things, but their song kept playing in the back of his mind, occasionally popping back up to where he could not ignore them until he forcibly occupied his mind with more pertinent things. Rui improved his bot factory slowly at first the speed picking up exponentially as he improved his tools, techniques, and understanding of biology. Biology, it seemed, was the key, his first presumption that the mechanical and electrical were separate from the biological, appeared to be wrong, he needed to combine all of these things to accomplish his goals. Yang was a great help, he was someone with whom Rui could discuss ideas, and this helped him gain some clarity of thought.