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Both prime ministers expressed their contentment with the first meeting held in November 2014 among organizations combating terrorism and agreed to hold these meetings annually. The two sides also expressed their contentment with the closer cooperation between security authorities and the operational support which includes the joint training carried out in December 2014 by police authorities of both countries and the increased communication and cooperation between the relevant authorities of both countries. The two sides also expressed their determination to share information to strengthen administrative and judicial enforcement in the fight against terrorism and to make use of all means including the construction of a discourse against extremist ideologies, especially through the Internet.

The two prime ministers also expressed their contentment with the progress made in the signing of the Treaty on Mutual Legal Assistance and agreed to start a process for the signing of a Memorandum of Understanding regarding the deportation of foreign combatants.

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Both prime ministers expressed their contentment with the first meeting held in November 2014, [STRIKE]among[/STRIKE] between organizations combating terrorism and agreed to hold these meetings annually. The two sides also expressed their contentment with the closer cooperation between security authorities and the operational support which includes the joint training carried out in December 2014, by police authorities [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] from both countries and the increased communication and cooperation between the relevant authorities [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] in both countries. The two sides also expressed their determination to share information to strengthen administrative and judicial enforcement in the fight against terrorism and to make use of all means, including the construction of a discourse against extremist ideologies, especially [STRIKE]through[/STRIKE] on the Internet.

The two prime ministers also expressed their contentment with the progress made [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] towards the signing of the Treaty on Mutual Legal Assistance and agreed to start a process for the signing of a Memorandum of Understanding regarding the deportation of foreign combatants.

Can you please check the English?
Consider using "satisfaction" instead of some of the instances of "contentment" above.
 
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