[Grammar] Can you tell me what's wrong with this sentence?

[arunxavi]

[FONT=&quot]"From being a lazy, procrastinating, and clueless person to becoming the hardest worker in the room, my journey started almost 7 years ago."

Someone please tell me what's wrong in this sentence. I just can't find it. Is it something related to formatting or grammar? I spent 15 minutes gazing at it.[/FONT]

 

[GoesStation]

Hi, and welcome to the forum. :hi:

If this is homework, we can't advise until after you've submitted it to your teacher.

Has your teacher or textbook provided some techniques for finding problems in sentences?