correct my sentence / the burn was ....

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mefa

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The burn was deep and


the shock was very strong on my


mom


Are there any mistakes in this sentence
 
The burn was deep and


the shock was very strong on my


mom


Are there any mistakes in this sentence
Which sentence?
 
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