[CV] could you correct me a part of my CV?

[Simone1]

hi everyone,

I’m learning English.
could you correct me a part of my CV?
Sorry for my mistakes.Thanks in advance


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WORK EXPERIENCES:

Giorgio Salvi Library of Florence



Library Services Officer


Civil Service Local – Italian Youth Guarantee
Project Name: Library to (for?) the community



From 10/2015 to 10/2016
30 hours on 5 working days


Main tasks:

Front-office operations:

- Local and interlibrary loan service through the Management program Fluxus.

- Assisting the public in accessing the internet and other web-based services.



Back-office operations:

- Inventorying and library materials collocation on Easycat.
- Shelving library materials by the Dewey Decimal Ststem.
- Promoting the cultural initiatives of Library through creating posters and bookmarks, distribution of pamphlets and update Facebook page.


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San Pellegrino spa – establishment Acqua Panna (Florence)
Food industry producting mineal water


production worker
seasonal work for shift (also nocturnals)


From 05/2015 to 09/2015


Main Tasks:

- Using the Management Program SAM-ERP 2 to manage traceability, production and quality (physical and visually control)
- Using of manchinery in manufacturing to packaging and bottling lines (such as palletizer, depalletizer, bundling machine, case packer, decreater)
- Replacing wrapping reels
- Pallets label control
-Using of electric pallet truck and forklift to unloading and loading pallets




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Thanks a lot!
Bye

 

[teechar]

Hi everyone,

I’m learning English.
could you help me correct [STRIKE]me[/STRIKE] a part of my CV?
Sorry for my mistakes. Thanks in advance


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WORK EXPERIENCE:

Giorgio Salvi Library - Florence

Library Services Officer


Local Government Administration [STRIKE]Civil Service Local[/STRIKE] – Italian Youth Guarantee
Project Name: Community Library [STRIKE]to (for?) the community[/STRIKE]

From 10/2015 to 10/2016
30 hours, [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] 5 [STRIKE]working[/STRIKE] days per week.
Main tasks:
[STRIKE]Front-office operations:
[/STRIKE]- Local and inter-library loan service [STRIKE]through[/STRIKE] using [STRIKE]the Management program[/STRIKE] Fluxus library software.
- Assisting the public in accessing the Internet and other web-based services.
[STRIKE]Back-office operations:[/STRIKE]
- Inventorying and library materials collocation on Easycat.
- Shelving library materials [STRIKE]by[/STRIKE] according to the Dewey Decimal System.
- Promoting the cultural initiatives of the library [STRIKE]through creating[/STRIKE] by making and distributing posters, [STRIKE]and[/STRIKE] bookmarks, [STRIKE]distribution of[/STRIKE] and pamphlets and updating the library's Facebook page.


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San Pellegrino [STRIKE]spa – establishment[/STRIKE] Acqua Panna (Florence)
Food [STRIKE]industry[/STRIKE] company producing mineral water


Production worker
seasonal work [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE] including night shifts [STRIKE](also nocturnals)[/STRIKE]

From 05/2015 to 09/2015

Main Tasks:
- Using the Management Program SAM-ERP 2 to manage traceability, production and quality (physical and visual) control.
- [STRIKE]Using of[/STRIKE] Operating machinery [STRIKE]in manufacturing to[/STRIKE] of packaging and bottling lines (such as palletizer, depalletizer, bundling machine, case packer, and decreater [ I don't know what that means. ]).
- Replacing wrapping reels
- Pallet label control
- Using [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] electric pallet truck and forklift to unload [STRIKE]ing[/STRIKE] and load [STRIKE]ing[/STRIKE] pallets

Don't forget to use a nice (clear and simple) format for your CV.

 

[Simone1]

Thank you very much.
You have been very kind! :-D

 

[emsr2d2]

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