Could you please check for mistakes in this paragraph.

[Muhammad Raza Wynne]

There is a great difference between the present and the past of my country. In past most of the people of my country were poor, they didn't have enough clothes and they had to content themselves on a single meal a day, definitely there were some who even didn't have a single meal in a day. Their meal was nothing but a loaf and an onion. Because of hunger they became so weak and thing and their plight was so miserable, but they didn't lose the hope, they worked day and night because they knew that God only helps those who helps themselves. After the years of tiresome work they achieved the fruit of their hard work, the consequence that the sky had never seen perhaps. Now there is no poor in our country, every one is rich and fat. Different types of dishes from all parts of the world are now found in our country and in the range of every person. Here now food is in excess even the animals of my country have become so fat. The size of our mouse is equal to the goat of other countries,similarly the size of our goat is equal to the cow of other countries and the size of our cow is equal to African Elephant. We are the happiest nation in the world and we are proud of our ancestors.

 

[teechar]

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