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Determination of/by Members of ABC Political Party

We, the members of the above party, determine:

1. To be cooperate with one another within our party, and

2. To do our best for the good of the citizens.


Should the preposition be 'of' or 'by'?

Are "Determination" and "determine" correctly used? Should "pledge" be used instead? Or should "Resolutions" and "resolve" be used in place of the two words respectively?


Thanks in advance.
 
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[STRIKE]Determination[/STRIKE] Pledge/Promise of[STRIKE]/by[/STRIKE] Members of ABC Political Party

We, the members of the above party, [STRIKE]determine[/STRIKE] promise/pledge:

1. To [STRIKE]be[/STRIKE] co-operate with one another within our party, and

2. To do our best for the good of the citizens.

Are "Determination" correctly and "determine" correctly used? Should "pledge" be used instead. Or should "Resolutions" and "resolve" be used in place of the two words respectively?

Should the preposition be 'of' or 'by'?

Thanks in advance.

Suggestions above.
 
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Determination Pledge/Promise of/by Members of ABC Political Party

We, the members of the above party, determine promise/pledge:

1. To be co-operate with one another within our party, and

2. To do our best for the good of the citizens.

Are "Determination" correctly and "determine" correctly used? Should "pledge" be used instead. Or should "Resolutions" and "resolve" be used in place of the two words respectively?

Should the preposition be 'of' or 'by'?

Thanks in advance.
Suggestions above..

Thanks, emsr2d2. It was a careless mistake in the case of 'to be cooperate'.
 
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