Diary - My dad underwent a surgery the other days and is recovering quite well.

[Maybo]

This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

My dad underwent a surgery the other days and is recovering quite well. Last year he underwent the same surgery but he could hardly walk. Therefore, we let him sit on a chair with wheels and pushed him to his bedroom and the bathroom. He's going to be operated on his eyes come April. I hope everything will be fine.

 

[tedmc]

This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

My dad underwent a surgery the other days and is recovering quite well. Last year he underwent the same surgery but he could hardly walk. Therefore, we let him sit on a chair with wheels use a wheelchair and pushed him to his bedroom and the bathroom. He's going to be operated on his eyes have an eye operation come April. I hope everything will be fine.

"The other day" means "a few days ago". There is no "the other days".

 

[Maybo]

Therefore, we let him sit on a chair with wheels use a wheelchair

It's not a wheelchair. I don’t know what it’s called. It’s something as this:

 

[emsr2d2]

My dad underwent a (no article here) surgery the other days day and is recovering quite well. Last year, he underwent the same surgery but he could hardly walk. Therefore, we let him sit put him on a chair with wheels and pushed him to his the bedroom and the bathroom. He's going to be operated have an operation on his eyes come April. I hope everything will be fine.

Note my changes above. It's not clear whether he couldn't walk after the surgery last year or the surgery he had a few days ago. Which is it?

 

[tedmc]

It's not a wheelchair. I don’t know what it’s called. It’s something as this:
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It is called a rolling chair. The "wheel" is called a castor.

 

[Maybo]

Note my changes above. It's not clear whether he couldn't walk after the surgery last year or the surgery he had a few days ago. Which is it?

He couldn't walk after the surgery last year.

 

[Tarheel]

As I understand it, he had the same surgery twice. Hopefully, he won't need that procedure again.

 

[emsr2d2]

He couldn't walk after the surgery last year.

In that case, I'd remove "Therefore, ..." and replace it with "That time, ...".