even now as adults, she still makes us quake in our boots

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diamondcutter

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As far as mothers go, I got lucky. “Is that really your mom?”--said in the most incredulous of tone--was a constant refrain when I was growing up. Now that I’m an adult, I see what the fuss was about. My mother is cool--way cooler than average. Not only that, she is so gorgeous and youthful that she could pass for my very hip older sister.
Being a single mother of two couldn’t have been easy, but she made it work. She was a fun and cool girlfriend to have growing up, but was also authoritative enough that even now as adults, she still makes us quake in our boots.
I give my mom full credit for making me the person who I am today. And as a tribute to her, I’d like to share some of the things I learned from her.

Source: https://pulptastic.com/10-things-my-cool-mom-taught-me/

She was a fun and cool girlfriend to have growing up, but was also authoritative enough that even now as adults, she still makes us quake in our boots.

Should “even now as adults” be “even though we are adults now”?
 

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No, there's no need to reword it. I would, however, put a comma before "as adults".
 

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I would also put another comma before "growing up".
 

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That may be comma overload.
 
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