dcintel
Junior Member
- Joined
- Apr 9, 2019
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Vietnamese
- Home Country
- Vietnam
- Current Location
- Vietnam
Would you please help me by correcting the following piece of writing with regards to grammar, vocabulary?
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regards to wonderful services and delicious food that we experience at your restaurant last night.
Last night, my two best friends: Gil, Natia, my two daughters and I went to Pizzaria restaurant at the corner near my house in Hayfield Street for dinner. I was very excited since I had just completed a master degree a couple days ago and I would like to wine-and-dice my two best friends and daughters a slap-up meal as I promised them before I enrolled in the course. After reading many good testimonials from www.foody.com, we decided to go to the restaurant.
What happened made us so happy and impressive. Staff were friendly and welcoming. The food orders arrived quickly, in good size, hot and inexpensive. In addition, the drinks were reasonably priced. We particularly impressed when our children became little impatient towards the end of the meal, then one of your staff, Harry, came and provided pencils, drawing materials for them to draw. That greatly eased great burdens of what had been a long tired day from our work.
I suggest that you should consider giving Harry a small gift as a reward for his kindly support.
Kind regards,
Simon Smith
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regards to wonderful services and delicious food that we experience at your restaurant last night.
Last night, my two best friends: Gil, Natia, my two daughters and I went to Pizzaria restaurant at the corner near my house in Hayfield Street for dinner. I was very excited since I had just completed a master degree a couple days ago and I would like to wine-and-dice my two best friends and daughters a slap-up meal as I promised them before I enrolled in the course. After reading many good testimonials from www.foody.com, we decided to go to the restaurant.
What happened made us so happy and impressive. Staff were friendly and welcoming. The food orders arrived quickly, in good size, hot and inexpensive. In addition, the drinks were reasonably priced. We particularly impressed when our children became little impatient towards the end of the meal, then one of your staff, Harry, came and provided pencils, drawing materials for them to draw. That greatly eased great burdens of what had been a long tired day from our work.
I suggest that you should consider giving Harry a small gift as a reward for his kindly support.
Kind regards,
Simon Smith