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Hello,
I’m wondering why the “had developed” part has not been changed into “ had been developing originally”. The reason I stress on this change is because of the structure of parallelism. What do you think?
The growth of commerce had brought Spaniards into contact with other societies thathad developed original had been developing originally and stimulating literary traditions.
I copied it from a GMAT exam.
I’m wondering why the “had developed” part has not been changed into “ had been developing originally”. The reason I stress on this change is because of the structure of parallelism. What do you think?
The growth of commerce had brought Spaniards into contact with other societies that
I copied it from a GMAT exam.