MeyaN
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"I didn't understand the first part of your speech. I also don’t understand what you mean by saying our thoughts are a product of social conditioning fully".
Is it correct to use "also", the way it's used above?
Should there be a comma before "fully"?
If there were 4-5 lines after "by saying", people would find it difficult to connect "fully" to what I started the sentence with["I also don't understand"]. They may consider it as the part of the last line due to time lapse created by those 4-5 lines and hence forgot the phrase I started with, though they may register the gist of the sentence I started with in their memory (please correct and shorten this sentence too). So how do you reconstruct the sentence in such cases where a huge paragraph is followed by an adjective, which connects to a sentence that is before the paragraph?
Is it correct to use "also", the way it's used above?
Should there be a comma before "fully"?
If there were 4-5 lines after "by saying", people would find it difficult to connect "fully" to what I started the sentence with["I also don't understand"]. They may consider it as the part of the last line due to time lapse created by those 4-5 lines and hence forgot the phrase I started with, though they may register the gist of the sentence I started with in their memory (please correct and shorten this sentence too). So how do you reconstruct the sentence in such cases where a huge paragraph is followed by an adjective, which connects to a sentence that is before the paragraph?
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