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[mariana112]

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to request further information about your Business Studies & Economics Programme. We are a small group of Students, really interested in participating. But we are in need of more information on your educational trips, the Silicon Roundabout Tour and the Fuller's Brewery.

Could you provide us some information about the costs.

 

[andrewg927]

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Could you please provide us with some information about the costs?

Thank you very much,
[Your name]

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