I request you to kindly reschedule the Test

[chameleon82]

Which of the following sentences is grammatically correct and more preferable to use :

1. I request you to kindly reschedule the Test so that I don't have to bear a financial loss.

2. I request you to kindly reschedule the Test so that I would not have to bear a financial loss.

Or does anyone know any alternate sentence to this then please do tell me.

Thanks!

 

[Matthew Wai]

I request that the test be rescheduled so that I will not suffer a loss of money.

 

[emsr2d2]

I'm happy with "... so I don't have to bear/suffer a financial loss" but I would start with "Please reschedule the test ..." or "I would like to request that the test be rescheduled ...".

"I request you to kindly" is ungrammatical and overkill. There was no reason to capitalise "test".