Seb
Member
- Joined
- Apr 11, 2023
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Spanish
- Home Country
- Costa Rica
- Current Location
- Costa Rica
Please help me to check if the following three sentences are correctly written.
a) Improve in the following 12 months, the English Language at an intermediate level, in oral and written comprehension, to give fluidity to internal communication when interacting in my working department.
b) Learn how to use KP, the company's new tool, to reach the intermediate level at the end of the year, and improve my performance by looking for collaboration in other company areas.
c) Manage the MS Acces Program after 10 months through online training, to be permanently updated in collecting, storing, analyzing and interpreting data.
Many thanks in advance
a) Improve in the following 12 months, the English Language at an intermediate level, in oral and written comprehension, to give fluidity to internal communication when interacting in my working department.
b) Learn how to use KP, the company's new tool, to reach the intermediate level at the end of the year, and improve my performance by looking for collaboration in other company areas.
c) Manage the MS Acces Program after 10 months through online training, to be permanently updated in collecting, storing, analyzing and interpreting data.
Many thanks in advance