alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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John stepped in the balcony. He looked up at the sky. A few stars shone dimly amid the light pollution. The city was suffocated by traffic and smog. He thought about Mary and for a second a smile crossed his lips. Then he remembered Mary was marrying another man and the smile died on his lips.
John stepped in the balcony. He looked up at the sky. A few stars shone dimly amid the light pollution. The city was suffocated by traffic and smog. He thought about Mary and for a second a smile crossed his lips. Then he remembered Mary was marrying another man and the smile died on his lips.