contiluo
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- Apr 12, 2010
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- English Teacher
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- Chinese
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- Taiwan
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Ming-ting and her classmates took a bus to the zoo last weekend. On the bus, one of them was listening to the music, while two of them were playing cards, and the others were singing the songs happily. Soon after, they arrived at the zoo. In the zoo, they took photos with the elephant, shook hands with the monkey, and painted the scenery in the zoo. They also interacted/played with many animals. After playing in the zoo, they enjoyed their meal in a fast food restaurant. They ordered lots of Cokes, fries, and hamburgers. They talked and laughed about funny things which happened on that day. What a nice day!
Ming-ting and her classmates took a bus to the zoo last weekend. On the bus, one of them was listening to the music, while two of them were playing cards, and the others were singing the songs happily. Soon after, they arrived at the zoo. In the zoo, they took photos with the elephant, shook hands with the monkey, and painted the scenery in the zoo. They also interacted/played with many animals. After playing in the zoo, they enjoyed their meal in a fast food restaurant. They ordered lots of Cokes, fries, and hamburgers. They talked and laughed about funny things which happened on that day. What a nice day!