tzfujimino
Key Member
- Joined
- Dec 8, 2007
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Japanese
- Home Country
- Japan
- Current Location
- Japan
One of my students wrote the following sentences.
I want to do some volunteer work when I become a high school student. I have never done any volunteer work. I want to volunteer to help others. I want to participate in various volunteer activities. For example, I want to participate in garbage picking and donation activities.
I think I should correct the last sentence.
I'd correct it to something like "I want to pick up garbage/trash and donate some of my money/old clothes."
Does "participate in garbage picking and donation activities" work?
I want to do some volunteer work when I become a high school student. I have never done any volunteer work. I want to volunteer to help others. I want to participate in various volunteer activities. For example, I want to participate in garbage picking and donation activities.
I think I should correct the last sentence.
I'd correct it to something like "I want to pick up garbage/trash and donate some of my money/old clothes."
Does "participate in garbage picking and donation activities" work?