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Which terms can be used here?

My neighbor's dachshunds have a bad ................... Even the slightest chance to destroy my plants will never be left out by them.

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Disposition is the natural choice. The second sentence doesn't work.
 

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chance ... will never be _ _ _ _ _ _ by them.
In that sentence, "left out" is unnatural. Think of a verb that naturally collocates with "chance" in such a context.
 

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If "left out" doesnt work, I think it should be "never be missed" or "never be missed out on".
 

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No, and nope. I would rewrite the sentence from scratch.
 

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I think I understand the writer's intention with will never be missed. The resulting sentence is terrible, though.

Do228, you should rewrite the second sentence in the active voice.
 

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They never miss out on the slightest chance to destroy my plants.

They never let a chance go by to destroy my plants.
 

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Remove "out on". I'd also remove "the slightest".
 

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They never miss out on the slightest chance to destroy my plants.

They never let a chance go by to destroy my plants.

Both are grammatically correct. It would be more natural to say "They never miss the opportunity to destroy my plants."
 
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