Peter was looking at me as if I had lost my mind

[Polyester]

I read a story and found a sentence that I want to rewrite it. Is it possible?

Original: Peter was looking at me as if I had lost my mind.

My version: I have lost my mind if Ken is looking at me.

 

[GoesStation]

Source and author?

 

[emsr2d2]

I read a story and found a sentence that I want to rewrite. [STRIKE]it.[/STRIKE] Is [STRIKE]it[/STRIKE] my version possible?

See above. You've made this same error in several posts now. If you want to use "rewrite it", you have to start differently.

I read a story and found a sentence. I want to rewrite it.
I read a story, found a sentence, and I want to rewrite it.
I read a story and found a sentence that I want to rewrite. (No "it".)

 

[Tarheel]

The original is understandable and makes sense. Your rewrite is not close to the original and doesn't make sense.
:-|

 

[Tdol]

The original means that Peter's expression suggested that he thought you had gone crazy. His expression did not cause you to look that way- he was reacting to something you had said or done.

 

[Rover_KE]

When did Peter change his name to Ken, and why?

 

[Tarheel]

When did Peter change his name to Ken, and why?

He just wanted to confuse people.
;-)