please keep in mind that the pricing difference between the first and second offers

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Joj

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Hello, can someone correct any errors in the email below.

Please keep in mind that the pricing difference between the first and second offers provided yesterday to you is related to battery costs. The "OPzV" batteries mentioned in the first offer do not need to be maintained.

Please see the attached third offer, which includes a cheaper inverter.
 

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You have been writing "please keep in mind" too often. "Please note that.." would be better.
We have repeatedly told you that what you sent out to your Clients are called "quotations", not "offers". There is no point in asking us to help you with editing your letters if our advice is not heeded.
 
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