silvery811
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I'm trying to rewrite the following paragraph using correct punctuation, indented paragraph breaks, and capitalization.
This is the original paragraph:
Are you kidding me Asher exclaimed I already know you will never understand me Yasmeet replied well if you asked me to understand I could at least try but no you just announce to the world that you are leaving for australia and taking the dog with you You don't even care about the dog Yasmeet snapped and turned away.
My edit:
“Are you kidding me? “ Asher exclaimed. “I already know you will never understand me,” Yasmeet replied. Well, if you asked me to understand, I could at least try, but no, you just announce to the world that you are leaving for Australia, and taking the dog with you. “You don't even care about the dog,” Yasmeet snapped and turned away.
PS: This is not an assignment. I'm just trying to learn punctuation. I really hope someone could explain and check this paragraph.
This is the original paragraph:
Are you kidding me Asher exclaimed I already know you will never understand me Yasmeet replied well if you asked me to understand I could at least try but no you just announce to the world that you are leaving for australia and taking the dog with you You don't even care about the dog Yasmeet snapped and turned away.
My edit:
“Are you kidding me? “ Asher exclaimed. “I already know you will never understand me,” Yasmeet replied. Well, if you asked me to understand, I could at least try, but no, you just announce to the world that you are leaving for Australia, and taking the dog with you. “You don't even care about the dog,” Yasmeet snapped and turned away.
PS: This is not an assignment. I'm just trying to learn punctuation. I really hope someone could explain and check this paragraph.
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