Economist2010
Member
- Joined
- Dec 22, 2011
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Arabic
- Home Country
- Egypt
- Current Location
- Egypt
Hi all,
I appreciate your kind help on the below e-mail. I am going to send it to a CEO. I wonder if you could re-write it in your own way.
Note: The CEO is English native speaker.
"I would like to share with you my recent milestones in how making IPay ranks the first among other mobile wallets in Iraq and how I turned the main challenge of low adoption, lack of awareness into opportunities. Along with that, adopted data monetization to maximize revenues:
Awarness Campaign:
Launched an aggressive awareness campaign to generate the outcome of boosting the public awareness of the product, and educating individuals how it is relevant, secured and available everywhere and to get more people to take action.
The campaign reach was 1.4M and the link of it is below.
Developing the Dashboard:
Enhanced the dashboard to provide not only basic performance insights but also complete visibility and real-time analytics of the data, industry benchmarks, powerful analysis to maximize and monetize our diverse data."
I appreciate your kind help on the below e-mail. I am going to send it to a CEO. I wonder if you could re-write it in your own way.
Note: The CEO is English native speaker.
"I would like to share with you my recent milestones in how making IPay ranks the first among other mobile wallets in Iraq and how I turned the main challenge of low adoption, lack of awareness into opportunities. Along with that, adopted data monetization to maximize revenues:
Awarness Campaign:
Launched an aggressive awareness campaign to generate the outcome of boosting the public awareness of the product, and educating individuals how it is relevant, secured and available everywhere and to get more people to take action.
The campaign reach was 1.4M and the link of it is below.
Developing the Dashboard:
Enhanced the dashboard to provide not only basic performance insights but also complete visibility and real-time analytics of the data, industry benchmarks, powerful analysis to maximize and monetize our diverse data."