diamondcutter
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Helen was born in 1880 in the United States. When she was nineteen months old, Helen fell ill. She had a high fever that made her blind and deaf.
(from an English textbook for junior high school students by DC Canada Education Publishing and Hebei Education Press)
I wonder if it’s better to rewrite the last sentence above like this:
She had a high fever, which made her blind and deaf.
That is to say the relative clause should be a nonrestrictive one.
(from an English textbook for junior high school students by DC Canada Education Publishing and Hebei Education Press)
I wonder if it’s better to rewrite the last sentence above like this:
She had a high fever, which made her blind and deaf.
That is to say the relative clause should be a nonrestrictive one.