the sound a horse's hooves makes

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alpacinou

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Is it common to use "clip-clopping" for the sound a horse's hooves makes?

Is this correct?

George woke to the clip-clopping of horses on the cobblestone street. The sounds took him back to his childhood village.
 

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That works for me.
 

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I'd use "on the cobblestones" or "on the cobbled street". I'd use "The sound" because "the clip-clopping" is singular.
 

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...woke up to...

Or
The sound was reminiscent of his childhood village.
The sound brought back memories of his childhood village.
 

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To clarify, you can open with:

He woke to ...
He woke up to ...
He awoke to ...
 
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