the streets mirror the sky

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alpacinou

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Hello

Imagine because of rain, the streets are wet and glistening. They become like mirrors. In that case, can I say this?

The streets were glistening with the rainwater and mirrored the gray sky.
 

Charlie Bernstein

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It's good. You don't necessarily have to say the before rainwater.
 

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How about awash in place of glistening?
 
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