The trend of allowing children to play on computers and smartphones ....

[duiter]

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The trend of allowing children to play on computers and smartphones as a method to master technology skills is a highly charged issue.
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[tedmc]

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I think "play on" and "as a method to" need to be looked into.

 

[emsr2d2]

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We don't put a space before a question mark. I have fixed it in your title. Please use the Edit Post function to fix it yourself in post #1.

 

[jutfrank]

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I think it's okay.

 

[Rover_KE]

Re: Is this sentence correct?

duiter, please note that a better thread title would have been allowing children to play on computers...

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