The wishing well was filled with fortunes.

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Okay. Are you writing a story or something? What exactly do you want us to do? Are you asking us to write the sentence for you? Or do you just want feedback on the two sentences you wrote in post #1?
I wish to get feedback on correct usage of the comma to stitch together clauses.

The replies, which you and other members gave, are what I was looking for.

I will continue to explore and create a new thread for a new sentence.

Thanks :)
 

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The seekers was filled with fortunes he needed and the wishing well was brought close to the seeker.
@LunaticMaestro Did you miss out a word in the underlined part? It makes no sense as written. For a start "The seekers" (plural noun) can't be followed by "was" (singular verb).
 
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