they wanted to hear

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Joseph ma

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He told his parents what they wanted to hear that he would help his brother with his school project.

Should there be a comma after "hear" or is there is no punctuation needed for this sentence?
 

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You definitely need some kind of punctuation there, yes. I'm a big fan of the dash:

He told his parents what they wanted to hear—that he would help his brother with his school project.

It works much better than a comma in this sentence.
 
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