To trace the ignorance

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Dukul12345

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Here are two paragraphs with same topic.Is there any grammatical mistake in these two paragraphs? Which one seems giving better understanding to you?

1.To trace the ingorance of who is asking the question is not the sufficient answer of the question rather the answer will be such that'll make the answer seeker enough knowledgeable.

2. Pointing out/ showing the ignorance of the questioner does not suffice the answer. Rather answer of the question should be such that will make the very questioner wise enough.
 
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The passages are incomprehensible. Try writing some simpler sentences.

To comply with forum rules, I've updated the thread's subject to contain some of the post's text.
 

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For what purpose have you written these impenetrable sentences (they're not paragraphs)?
 

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You apparently mean something with the gist of:

Merely pointing out the ignorance of the questioner does not provide a satisfactory answer. A good answer aims to teach the asker something.
 
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