[Vocabulary] usage of preposition

[KSSEEJ]

The burden on the members of our school is increasing, especially on the students


Is it acceptable to use "for" or simply no preposition to form the last clause?

 

[Raymott]

Both of those changes would be for the worse. The sentence already says what it means.
You could possibly use "for", but not no preposition at all.

 

[5jj]

The burden on the members of our school is increasing, especially on the students.

I think we can use 'for', and I think it's an improvement: The burden on the members of our school is increasing, especially for the students.

It is increasing for the students. What is increasing? The burden on members of the school.