When the financial situation

[Gaya87]

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

Short summary
When the financial situation of his family gets difficult, a carefree young man, Jomon reveals a much different side of himself.

Long summary
Vincent is a business tycoon in Thrissur city. All his children are well-settled except for Jomon, his proverbial prodigal son, whom all accuses of being incessantly irresponsible. One day, Vincent business move falters, his family finds a financial crisis where he loses his home and wealth. While all his other children make it clear that they want no part in his struggle, Jomon steps in and takes his father under his wing. Can he manage to solve the financial crisis alone?

 

[teechar]

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

Short summary
When the financial situation of his family gets difficult, a carefree young man, Jomon reveals a much different side of himself.

Long summary
Vincent is a business tycoon in Thrissur City. All his children are well settled, except for Jomon, his proverbial prodigal son, whom all accuse of being [STRIKE]incessantly[/STRIKE] always irresponsible. One day, a business decision by Vincent backfires, and [STRIKE]business move falters,[/STRIKE] his family [STRIKE]finds[/STRIKE] faces a financial crisis where he loses his home and wealth. While all his other children make it clear that they want no part in his struggle, Jomon steps in and takes his father under his wing. Can he manage to solve the financial crisis alone?

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